for a strong, fast pick-me-up
We can all improve our writing by learning how Hemingway used repetition and the sound of words.
I’ll share one of my favourite Hemingway sentences – that can help you add flavour and sound to your writing!
I love the repetition and the sound of the words.
This sentence always makes me “taste” oysters and cold white wine.
As I ate the oysters with their strong taste of the sea and their faint metallic taste that the cold white wine washed away, leaving only the sea taste and the succulent texture, and as I drank their cold liquid from each shell and washed it down with the crisp taste of the wine…
(A Moveable Feast)
I’m on a family beach vacation – and enjoying a Hemingway vibe.
It’s been a joy to be surrounded by boats and seafood and to have time to re-read…
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