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What writers can learn from Billy Bragg – the “sting in the tail” trick!

William Bloke CD

Do you want your writing to surprise and delight your readers?

Well, you can learn from UK songwriter Billy Bragg – known as the Bard from Barking.

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I’ve been a fan of Bragg’s songwriting since the ’80s – and still love listening to his music and finding more writing treats!

I used to find his singing voice very nasal and flat – but his lyrics were so sharp and clever!

I thought he was witty and playful – sometimes caustic, sometimes funny.

As a student I would write down my favourite lines in a note book.

I loved his lyrics and song angles – especially this technique  I call “the sting in the tail”.

Billy writes a set-up line that “sucks you in”.

You think he is going to sing something “sweet and romantic ” – then he’s add a little “sting in the tail” that flows perfectly from the set-up words and yet totally changes the meaning.

One of my favourite “sting in the tail” songs is one of his lesser-known songs – a simple little ditty called Everybody Loves You Babe – from his album William Broke.

The lyrics actually say:  Everybody likes you  babe.

I could be wrong but I always thought the  Bragg song title  was a play on the old Dean Martin romantic song:

Everybody LOVES somebody sometime.

It even sounds a bit  saloon “piano ballady” – rather than his usual guitar-driven songs.

The sting in the tail technique:

Anyway, the sting in the tail technique works like this:

For example:

1. a romantic sounding line

Everybody love you babe

2. then some words that flip the meaning.

– but me

and another great line from the song.

1. a romantic sounding line

I’d hate for you to go 

2. then some words that flip the meaning.

– before I let you know

and even another one!

1. a romantic sounding line

I’m begging you to stay

2. then some words that flip the meaning.

– out of my way

Here’s a photo of the full lyrics for you to enjoy.

BB lyrics 2 ELYB

I’m enjoying a wonderful time house-sitting and pet-minding for a music friend who has an amazing collection of CDs of many of my favourite song-writers including Billy Bragg and Paul Weller.

lots of BB CDs

I love having time to get re-acquainted with these favourite songs from my youth – from the days when I played in uni bands! We were in Australia – but were influenced by that UK vibe!

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Now I’m a writing coach and trainer – and I find all those hours poring over  Billy Bragg and Paul Weller  album lyrics and liner notes  can be put to good use in teaching various writing techniques.

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So remember – when YOU want to add some “edge” and fresh angles to your writing –  when YOU want to surprise your readers and delight them with your wit – try the sting in the tail technique.

Everybody will love you for it – including me!

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If YOU have any favourite lyrics  (from any song-writer) – please share them in the comments section below.

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If you like Billy Bragg and Paul Weller – here are links to other posts.

1. Get your year off to a better Start!

2. How Paul Weller can help you improve your writing – powerful description and understatement

3.https://efangelist.wordpress.com/2014/01/11/the-power-of-anti-adjectives-and-anti-adverbs-paul-weller-style/

4.Write like a movie camera – like Down in the Tube Station at Midnight

Also, here are links to more writing tips that can make your writing more “real” and engaging – and even entertaining!

I’m getting 2014 off to a strong start with my blogging too.

If you’d like to improve your writing: Here are some quick tips.

1.Release The Verb

2.How nouns can save your butt!

3.Use visual language

4.Parallel Structure

And here’s a link to the song. You’ll hear how good writing allows good delivery of the sting in the tail!

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